My essay LR

Kevin GCSE Media – Industries, Internet and Audiences essay learner response – December 2019

Post this in a new blogpost on your Media blog called ‘Industry and Audience essay Learner Response’ then complete the LR tasks/questions below. 

Audience essay feedback:

WWW:

·         Some examples provided on how the internet has effected the music industry e.g. when you comment on the rise of streaming services to access music content (YouTube, SoundCloud and Spotify)

·         Some ability to comment on the three traditional types of media industries e.g. music, film and television and print and how the internet has impacted these

EBI:

·         Lacking a clear viewpoint or sense of argument within your essay e.g. needs an introduction and conclusion which summarises your opinion of this statement

·         Lacking specific subject terminology to your writing, see planning sheet and GLoW of what terminology you can include

LR: see GCSE Media Year 1 blog 

2) What was the word count for your essay?
the word count for my essay was 600 words.

3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
 The strongest paragraph is my second one because it had strong points and in my opinion it was better than others.

4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others? the weakest paragraph is the last one becuase it was the shortest and i kind of ran out what to say which made less professional. 

) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future? i would use my book more and use what i have learnt from it.

6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay
i have learnt that we have really improved